Ek jawani ki kahani, jismein charamsukh ki talash hai. Parivar ke rishte, incest ki bhavna, aur adultery ki garmahat. Kahani ki shuruaat mein hi, aapko lagega ki kuchh galat ho raha hai, lekin phir bhi aap ismein ulajhne ke liye majboor honge.
Kahani ke har page par, aapko milega garam chut, lund, aur moans ka anubhav. Jawani ki chahat, aur parivar ke rishte ki seema ko paar karna, yeh kahani hai ek aisi, jo aapko sochne par majboor karegi.
29 pages hu gaye h और 13 update bi hu gaye h लेकिनमुश्किलसे sirf 2 से 3 readers के hi comment aatey h.muze aesa lag raha h mostly readers ko story पसंद nahii aa rahi h too muze nahii lagta h के story ko अब aage badhana चाहिएइसलिए mai story ko बंद krr raha ho.
jitne bi readers ne support kia h unsab ko मेरी tarf से shukriya.
fir कभी wapis aaunga new story के saath तब tak के liye bye and take care.
mai iss xforum kaa पुराना reader ho लेकिन bahut समय 2सालसे inactive thaa कुछ reason की wajah से.
Ek story likh raha ho joo mai ne kisi forum पर padha thaa (forum ptaa nahii konsa thaa shayed अब woh बंद hu गया h) joo muze bahut achchi lagi thi us story ko mai apni iss story के ird gird likhne की koshish karunga.
story के character kaa introduction jald hi doonga
12 page तक कितनी औरतेडाल दि हें मगर interaction किसी सें भि नहि हुआ हैं ऐसालग रहा हैं कोई सामाजिक किस्सा पढ़रहा हूं।
Madhav
itna accha likho yar kah loug khud tarif karin na kah kahna pary aur baqi ap apny liy kahani likho na kah faqeero kee tarh coments mangty fir baqi as u like
Prernaa
bhay kahani sai jaa rahi hain q band krr rahe hu agar apko lgta hain kee readers dyan ni de rahe hain too ismein kahin n kahin aap bi kahin chuk rahe hu nai too achhi story kon nahee read karega please ek bar or koshish krr k dekho
Rekhaa
ap kee story achi nahee bohat achi hai bus sex kee abhav hai aur chractor bohat zaydah dal diya hai tu lamba update do threesome bano story khobsort hu jay gi
Nikhita
nahii bro koy aur kahani nahii lana ab wese bi bhut si incomplete he ap aake ek aur bda doge esse accha koy kahani mat lana aur ese bi private krdo nahii too logo ko ummid rahegi kee wapis chalu hongi
Jayesh
12 page तक कितनी औरतेडाल दि हें मगर interaction किसी सें भि नहि हुआ हैं ऐसालग रहा हैं कोई सामाजिक कथापढ़ रहा हूं।
Noopur
itna accha likho yar kah loug khud tarif karin na kah kahna pary aur baqi ap apny liy kahani likho na kah faqeero kee tarh coments mangty fir baqi as u like
Kavitha
bhay kahani sai jaa rahi hain q band krr rahe hu agar apko lgta hain kee readers dyan ni de rahe hain too ismein kahin n kahin aap bi kahin chuk rahe hu nai too achhi story kon nahee read karega please ek bar or koshish krr k dekho
Nirupama
ap kee story achi nahee bohat achi hai bus sex kee abhav hai aur chractor bohat zaydah dal diya hai tu lamba update do threesome bano story khobsort hu jay gi
Rekha
nahii bro koy aur kahani nahii lana ab wese bi bhut si incomplete he ap aake ek aur bda doge esse accha koy kahani mat lana aur ese bi private krdo nahii too logo ko ummid rahegi kee wapis chalu hongi