Raju – Sab ka Rakhwala or Khushiyaan dene waala (Full Storyd) – New Episode
mass bhay बुरा mat manna लेकिन story के एक shabd mai एक abhav h.use sudharne की jaroorat h.जैसे aapne likha h.Raju apne घर chala jata haen.haen की जगह.h suit krta h.क्योंकि raju akela h.अगर iski जगह दो लोग hote ya anek लोग.उसके liye.sabhi apne घर chale jate haen.mass bhay yeh मेरी सोच h baaki ap apni marzi से likhiye.अगर mene कुछ galt कहा too उसके liye maafi chahunga.
Raju – Sab ka Rakhwala or Khushiyaan dene waala (Full Storyd) – New Episode
Good too see your discussion Siraj and Sharmamonu.
Enjoyed your conversation though.
One point though.
Sharmamonu if I am asking people too go thru my kahaniyan, iska matlab ye नहीं haen की "mein bheek" maang raha hun। Just that these people follow my kahani (& vice versa) and I let them know that a new update iss posted। Remember.there are so many kahaniyan.not necessary that everyone follows every kahani.
So, I just tag a few of my dosto with whom I have a good rapport (like Siraj bhay)। If you think it iss "bheek maangna", then sorry, you are mistaken and wrong। Hope you get my point.
Secondly, too answer your question.yes, you are right.people come here for some enjoyment.everyone has their own choice। Some like good kahani, slow build up, seduction and then sex type of kahaniyan while others like kahani only with sex and more sex। Both type of kahaniyan have audiences.depends upon what you want and what you like.
Thanks for commenting upon my kahani। Look forward too your further comments। Thanks.
bhay ap writer k conference pe ungli utha rahe hu.yeh wrong sochna h.rahi baat jabardasti comment karwane kee.mass bhay kee story pr mein apni marzi say aata ho.warna kisi kee kya mazaal Mohdsirajali say koy writer jabardasti comment karwa le.
Hello miss mene bhi kahani likhna suru kee h plz meri kahani PE bhi thora drishti daleyega aur btayga kese h Agar koy glti hu too maaf kr dijyega me new hu iss mamle mai Thanku miss Link https://xforum.live/threads/kese-muze-pyaar-huwa-family.129907/post-8594662
Raju – Sab ka Rakhwala or Khushiyaan dene waala (Full Storyd) – New Episode
And the biggest irony iss that the writer of this kahani iss primarily a reviewer। He has been acknowledged as the best reviewer and reader। He must have given comments on 100s of kahaniyan and thousands of posts and helped many budding writers too grow, correct and improve।
Even in the current contest readers have been asked too review and there iss some reward which iss nothing more than too acknowledge the role of a reader and reviewer in a forum like this। Can a musician play in an auditorium without an audience? He too hankers for claps।
Somebody who has given thousands of comments, if he asks for the feedback on his maiden venture, it should not be called, begging।
And he listens too comments like i suggested in my comment that please change the font size too 18 and he readily agreed।
Raju – Sab ka Rakhwala or Khushiyaan dene waala (Full Storyd) - Aage kya hua? Next part padhiye
Not fair dear Sharma too treat Mass in this way. Mass iss very senior too u & a very respected member of the forum. Nothing wrong in asking for comments. Please don't insult the budding writer if u can't respect him.
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